Classroom Peer Feedback

After reviewing my midterm submission, it was clear to me that I needed to do a lot of revision to the pages of my magazine.

Title:

The Title Page of my magazine, which I believed was by far my most organized page of my magazine. The class thought the same as well and it was very well thought of. I was told by some of my classmates that I had even  made them hungry because of the title page.

Table of Contents:

My table of contents was meant to be a picture of another bbq restaurant I had visited, however on adobe illustrator it showed just the background which was a black sky. It appeared that the table of contents looked only like a back background, so that is one thing I will have to adjust. It was also suggested that I place a few pictures into the table of contents in order to increase the overall appearance of the magazine.

Article Pages:

I was flustered when trying to submit my midterm submission, therefore I rushed to complete the article page and it was left very unorganized and disproportionate. I will go in and revise this article page so it looks much more appealing.